July 20, 1722. Ruins of the Silvashar Library of Lësarilis. Deep in a swamp on San Andrés Island, off the contested eastern coast of New Spain in the Caribbean Sea.
I absolutely love the start of this story. It has everything ... magic, creatures, book-crab-creatures, and explosive villians! I can't wait to see how this turns out.
Wow! This is how you start a story! I’ve had another of yours saved for ages. Guess I am diving into your catalog! I’ll be keeping an eye out for those thesaurus crabs!
I absolutely love the start of this story. It has everything ... magic, creatures, book-crab-creatures, and explosive villians! I can't wait to see how this turns out.
And just think, this is only the beginning!
The writing here is so stunning. Just beautiful paragraph after beautiful paragraph. A thrilling conclusion to this chapter as well!
Thank you so much! ❤️ There are 26 more ( 27 by this Friday ) , I hope you enjoy the entire story!
Wow! This is how you start a story! I’ve had another of yours saved for ages. Guess I am diving into your catalog! I’ll be keeping an eye out for those thesaurus crabs!
Thank you! I'm pretty pleased where this one starts. Next one in this series is up in about 2 weeks on a friday.
What a wonderful start with a dashing hero and a worthy villain!!! Can't wait to read more!👏👏👏
Thank you! Our hero absolutely has more trouble heading his way!
I really like how you made a whole new narrator voice for this. Well done!
Thanks! I was really hoping this narrator voice would stand out from the other one.
This one comes across as a bit more snarky and self confident. He adds a more humorous touch to things.
Yeah, I really like to lean into how a character's backstory, and their environment, shape their culture, and really their view.
Nicely done.
You’re doing great! Keep it going! 👍🔥
Thanks! ❤️
Great beginning to a bold new tale of adventure, intrigue, and otherworldly horror.
Thank you! And this is just the start!
Thesaurus crabs behind, wicked captains in front! I already hooked! Great beginning!
thank you! Wait until you see what's to come!