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Tell Me a Mystery's avatar

WOW! You're mind is amazing, my friend! I love all the places this story goes and how you paint the scene! Fantastic! Can't wait until the next part! Hang in there, Pedro!

Kummer Wolfe's avatar

❤️ Thank you, Ann! Full disclosure? I was terrified this chapter wouldn't land very well. Wrote this one a bit frantically as the week got so far away from me it was scary. But! I've been waiting the WHOLE STORY to get two specific chapters and this was one of them!

Tell Me a Mystery's avatar

Well, worry no more. It was FANTASTIC!!!!

Kummer Wolfe's avatar

Thank you! ❤️🥹

Wyldspace's avatar

Frantic and scary was exactly the way to do it.

Leanne Shawler's avatar

Nooooo …. Ye gods. Also … Death Whispers are like our characters? Hmmm… maybe I should be nicer to mine.

Kummer Wolfe's avatar

😏 I know , right? Makes you think!!

Richard Ritenbaugh's avatar

🎼 The bay is alive with the sound of music! 🎶

Kummer Wolfe's avatar

🎶With Death Whispers that have sung for five minutes!!! 🎶 😂

Richard Ritenbaugh's avatar

We should avoid songwriting in the future.

Kummer Wolfe's avatar

😂 I think you're right! It might get labeled a crime against humanity... or at least songwriting! 😂