Fantastic opening scene, Kummer! For some reason, I really liked, "The caribou galloped with gleeful caribou abandon." It kinda encapsulated the feel of the scene.
GodDAMN, Kummer! You really know how to write an action scene. I chuckled my way through this. The homage to Indy is strong in this one, and I love it!
Fantastic opening scene, Kummer! For some reason, I really liked, "The caribou galloped with gleeful caribou abandon." It kinda encapsulated the feel of the scene.
😂 Honestly, that was one of the best lines to write! I laughed so hard I cried from writing it!
Ver D&D-esque from bad to worse start. Thanks for posting! Curious to see how far the steam will carry->
Thank you!
Great start, fantastic action. I look forward to reading more!
Thanks! Hope you enjoy the rest!
What a start! This was a fun read. I loved being thrown right into the action!
Keep an eye out for Story Highlights #8 at the House of Chapters!
Thank you! Glad you enjoyed it!
GodDAMN, Kummer! You really know how to write an action scene. I chuckled my way through this. The homage to Indy is strong in this one, and I love it!
😂Thank you! I had a lot of fun writing this chapter. It had me laughing more than once when I was polishing it.
And we're off!!! Wow! Tela & Ki at it again. Times are good!❤️
Ki might need a tranquilizer though 😂
And can we talk about that title? Slithering Maze!!!! I'm ready for that location. Not. 😄
😂Just think how Ki will feel?!?!
I can see that. It's tough when the plan changes. 😆
True. It could also be said Ki can get a bit nervous at times, too....