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IRIDYSCENZIA's avatar

Brilliant…! 👏

Tell Me a Mystery's avatar

Loved the action! Loved the banter! Will never go on a splunking trip with you, my friend. 😆 The Deeplands creeped me out. And you wrote it so well, it was like being there. Yikes!

Kummer Wolfe's avatar

Aww, c'mon... if we hurry we can reach the Cave of Unspeakable Horrors by Midnight! 😂😁 (glad you enjoyed the installment!)

Tell Me a Mystery's avatar

Hahaha. No. 🫣

Tell Me a Mystery's avatar

Hahaha. No. 🫣

Richard Ritenbaugh's avatar

I've noticed that fictional ambushes--set by either protags or antags--rarely go as planned. I wonder what their success rate is in real life. Poor Tela!

Kummer Wolfe's avatar

Well, if the goal was "keep the lich busy" or "get the lich out of the way" while someone gets Kiyosi free... hm... maybe that part was a success? So 50-50?

Richard Ritenbaugh's avatar

I guess you're right, but Tela is still lying on the floor of the tunnel, buried under rubble. So there's that. 😀

Kummer Wolfe's avatar

😂Ah, she's just having a little nap!

Leanne Shawler's avatar

Ki is going to be sooo upset. Also, grinned at this week’s Indy reference. Why did it have to be the Deeplands, indeed…

Kummer Wolfe's avatar

Yep! ... well, yes, once he finds out! 😁

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Kummer Wolfe's avatar

Yep, sure do. I typically ask a few of my paid subscribers if they’s like to beta read.

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Kummer Wolfe's avatar

Good to meet you! Hope you enjoy the serial.