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Leanne Shawler's avatar

Oh. My. WORD. This one left me breathless! 100/10!

Kummer Wolfe's avatar

Thank you! And just one more chapter left, too!

Leanne Shawler's avatar

I think I’ll be sad when it’s over…

Kummer Wolfe's avatar

Fair. But! Hopefully! It’ll leave some good memories and fun “what-ifs” from the little things in the story between characters and in locations and all.

Leanne Shawler's avatar

Yeah don’t think I didn’t notice the ramifications around Maddock’s “Ma’am”, ‘cause I sure did. Mind, I am still reeling over that “velvet lie” phrase…

Kummer Wolfe's avatar

Also! Ah... you might want to clip on and buckle up for chapter 7... *cough* given the whole "velvet lie" phrase.

Kummer Wolfe's avatar

I figured you might've! Maddock is just so so much fun to write. It's like he has a whole conversation in a phrase. ... then there's Rourke. Oh, I think I almost scared myself with him

Richard Ritenbaugh's avatar

"I’m a doctor, not a priest!” reminded me of Bones on Star Trek: "I'm a doctor, not an escalator!"

Kummer Wolfe's avatar

😂😂😂