Fantastic chapter!!! I wanted to keep reading!!! Loved the Dorian Grey twist. That's so fun! You've created an almost unbeatable villian, and he's awesome!!! More, please.🤩
Loved this chapter. It was great to get some answers about the Baren and diving more into the magic and curses really added depth to your world. Also loved the exchanged greeting:
Ruathan nodded in greeting.
“Pure ore and good craft.”
"Good winds,” Mikasi replied, though he stumbled a bit over his words.
Fantastic chapter!!! I wanted to keep reading!!! Loved the Dorian Grey twist. That's so fun! You've created an almost unbeatable villian, and he's awesome!!! More, please.🤩
Thanks! ❤️ I've got another one in the works, just let me cook a bit and it'll be ready! But it's coming!
Yay, Tela finds answers and (looks like) another ally! Solid chapter answering some lingering questions.
Well, at least for me, it wouldn't be fun if more questions showed up after one or two got answered.😊
No fun at all . . .
Exactly!
Loved this chapter. It was great to get some answers about the Baren and diving more into the magic and curses really added depth to your world. Also loved the exchanged greeting:
Ruathan nodded in greeting.
“Pure ore and good craft.”
"Good winds,” Mikasi replied, though he stumbled a bit over his words.
Awesome.
Thanks! I always feel cultures should get a solid nod in stories instead of just always saying "hello".
Agreed!